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Furiously scribbling across the page;
My pen does little to resist.

What am I doing, writing this poem
At 1 am?
I have school tomorrow.

"Why are you still awake?"
Why?
Well, you see, it's just not as simple
As all that.
There are too many possibilities, ideas, expressions
To sleep.

(Of course I forgive you, but could it hurt to wait until morning?)

But I cannot explain this
To someone who has never before been driven to create something.
You'll just think I'm being
Childish, silly,
Dramatic.
So I simply say,
"Sorry, Dad"
Close my notebook
And get back in bed
Until you are gone.

Because it's not my fault I'm awake.
The writer in me won't leave me alone.
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A short blip, describing how my poetic brain cells have been screwing with my sleep pattern lately. Jeez. =__= But this is truly how I feel. Can anyone relate?
Also, any suggestions on how to improve the last line? I feel like "the writer in me" could be something better.
Sorry it's not longer.

Poem (c) :icontheolivethief14:

Be honest. Am I a lame poet because I only write free verse? ;__;
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~coup-de-coeur Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hah, i can totally relate to you. i always keep something on which i can write next to me so i can jot down my ideas, my rhymes, my particular metaphors that i think i'll still like. sometimes i get inspired in the middle of an exam and i'm like really? haha.

don't worry about writing free verse, i do too, and i think some of my strongest works are free verse.
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~theolivethief14 Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yes. It's like your ideas are trolling you. XD
Thank you ^//^
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*Mikisakiiro Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha, this is exactly how I am with drawing.
But after midnight, sleep usually takes priority. I can always just scribble down the ideas for drawings and do them the next day.
Oh and about halfway through the poem--I think you mean to say 'could it hurt', not 'it could hurt'. c;
And you most definitely are not lame because you do free verse. Anyone can jot down words that don't rhyme and call it poetry but not many can put such heart and soul into it like you do <3
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~theolivethief14 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I do my best drawings at night
And I just finished some Liv questions and I feel awesome ;u;

Whoops! Thanks for catching that >w<
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Seriously? You just made my night ;u; :heart:
LET ME GIVE YOU ALL THE LAVS IN THE WORLD~~
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*Mikisakiiro Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha, I'm so proud of you.
I need to work on questions but I just don't have tiimmmee >3<
Aww no problem bby ;3;
YAY LAVS <3
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~theolivethief14 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X3
I knoww @_@ I have no idea how the older, awesomer admins do it. They actually have lives. XD
LAVS FOR EVERYONE :heart: :iconletmehugyouplz:
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*Mikisakiiro Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe they're just more faithful to their ask accounts. XD
SPREAD THE LAAVVV :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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~theolivethief14 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, that's it o3o
SO MUCH LAV :iconsupertighthugplz:
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*Mikisakiiro Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If only I didn't have to sleep. I could be so much more productive. XD
CAAAAN YOU FEEEL THE LAAAV TONIIIGHT :iconbrohugplz:
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~theolivethief14 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AMG ME TOO O__O
THERES MAGIC IN THE AIR~:icondragonhugplz:
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